You need to get your mock covers uploaded so Mr Nicolle and I can offer you tips.
We also need to see how you plan on laying out your contents and DPS.
Remember what Mr Nicolle said about level 4 planning, we must see the drafting process.
From the interview I have no idea what style of music Hector Drew plays. there needs to be more about him as an artist and less informal chat. Also there are non of the questions from fans and nothing about his legs even though you claimed as much in the intro.
I'd also avoid having the interview in a lounge as it doesn't seem too glamorous. Why not set the interview in a hotel suite following his concert in Liverpool the night before?
Luke
ReplyDeleteYou need to get your mock covers uploaded so Mr Nicolle and I can offer you tips.
We also need to see how you plan on laying out your contents and DPS.
Remember what Mr Nicolle said about level 4 planning, we must see the drafting process.
From the interview I have no idea what style of music Hector Drew plays. there needs to be more about him as an artist and less informal chat. Also there are non of the questions from fans and nothing about his legs even though you claimed as much in the intro.
I'd also avoid having the interview in a lounge as it doesn't seem too glamorous. Why not set the interview in a hotel suite following his concert in Liverpool the night before?