My Feedback For The Draft

Luke

• All mid-shots, no veriety.
• Random pictures.
• Good register & language.
• Inconsistent colour scheme.

Sammy

• Put into columns?
• Good colour scheme.
• All mid-shots.
• Well structured.
• Vary it a bit more.

Mae

• Pictures that relate to music.
• Wider range of shots.
• Double page spread should look a bit better? Block?
• Good colour scheme for cover.